笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2010-10-15 03:35:26 Post subject: 七律-咏柳 |
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读白云兄片云词，和上一首助兴：
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恩赐姓杨堤岸栽，成荫确是少勤陪。
君前始得春风浴，人后方赢古史材。
清影不堪依瘦月，舞姿偏喜拂亭台。
悠悠梦意无穷尽，烟雨飘渺入世怀。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-10-15 03:46:09 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄好诗！成阴----成荫？
以旧作和之：
七绝 咏柳
拂尘潇洒水边仙，笑看人间来往帆。
醉卧春风添绿意，千江尽映翠衣衫。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-10-15 05:31:18 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊兄好诗！成阴----成荫？
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谢谢庆宏兄好诗相和！醉卧春风添绿意，千江尽映翠衣衫。
又打错字了，见笑。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-10-15 06:35:08 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳!
笑聊,"清影不堪依瘦月,舞姿偏喜拂亭台." 生动形象描柳姿!
庆宏,"醉卧春風添綠意",好句!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2010-10-15 10:52:20 Post subject: |
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'清影不堪"句巧用拟人手法,生动恰切!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-10-16 00:11:00 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云兄鼓励！问好。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-10-16 00:11:56 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| '清影不堪"句巧用拟人手法,生动恰切! |
谢谢黄老师赞誉鼓励！问好。 |
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