Maple Review :: View topic

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 古韵新音

七绝秋意

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-09 17:17:01 Post subject: 七绝秋意

七绝秋意（和昕阳一片）秋枫似火满山燃，流水淙淙奏管弦。何必伤秋悲落叶，缤纷五彩比春天。昕阳一片原玉七绝•秋枫霜风已冷谷间泉，且看红妆竟逐妍。潜入潭中千尺底，欲将山火水中燃。

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-10-09 22:06:13 Post subject:

唱和俱佳！问好两位。

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection

Posted: 2010-10-10 03:13:10 Post subject:

何必伤秋悲落叶，缤纷五彩比春天。秋日缤纷 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-10 03:47:46 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

唱和俱佳！问好两位。

谢谢笑聊兄雅赏。

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-10 03:48:24 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

何必伤秋悲落叶，缤纷五彩比春天。

秋日缤纷

谢谢寒水兄雅赏。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-10 12:11:46 Post subject:

"何必伤秋悲落叶,缤纷五彩比春天". 庆宏积极乐覌的人生覌,好! 学习了! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-11 04:25:28 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

"何必伤秋悲落叶,缤纷五彩比春天". 庆宏积极乐覌的人生覌,好! 学习了!

谢谢白云老师！我从白云老师和其他诗友的诗词里学到很多。在诗坛上大家互相学习切磋，友谊倍增。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-11 07:25:53 Post subject:

庆宏,说得好.相互在赋诗与论诗中,吸取营养,丰盛人生! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-10-11 17:53:36 Post subject:

秋枫似火满山燃，流水淙淙奏管弦。何必伤秋悲落叶，缤纷五彩比春天。这首绝句写的非常棒，功在第三句转折上。再赏好诗！

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2010-10-12 05:05:22 Post subject:

<秋枫>一绝,想象奇特. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-12 08:23:05 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

秋枫似火满山燃，流水淙淙奏管弦。
...

谢谢笑聊兄鼓励！我们互相学习，共同提高。

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-12 08:24:20 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

<秋枫>一绝,想象奇特.

谢谢黄老师！盼望与你在多伦多重逢。

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2010-10-18 19:29:59 Post subject:

清风燎红叶，又是写秋时

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-19 08:21:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

清风燎红叶，又是写秋时

欢迎白水兄乘风归来！

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 古韵新音

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME