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大江
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Posted: 2007-03-31 04:47:39 Post subject: 小诗两首

（原创）路 一场大雪面前 世界， 夹紧了尾巴。  阳光下， 我分明看到 一条条黑夜 在裸奔（原创）大厦　　　田野里疯长着　　高产的庄稼　　沙漠的颜色　　往往也会让人眩晕　　大地　　--我悲哀的母亲啊，　　是谁　　正用一把无情的手术刀　　阉割着您，和您的梦？！　　       

三色堇
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Joined: 25 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2007-03-31 05:05:07 Post subject:

一场大雪面前 世界， 夹紧了尾巴。  阳光下， 我分明看到 一条条黑夜 在裸奔 ------------------------------------ 看好第一首,干净而有空间感.

大江
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 13

大江Collection

Posted: 2007-03-31 05:28:11 Post subject:

三色堇 wrote:

一场大雪面前
世界，
夹紧了尾巴。

阳光下，
我分明看到
一条条黑夜
在裸奔

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看好第一首,干净而有空间感.

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