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七绝•秋枫

昕阳一片
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Posted: 2010-10-09 04:06:59 Post subject: 七绝•秋枫

七绝•秋枫昕阳一片霜风已冷谷间泉，且看红妆竟逐妍。潜入潭中千尺底，欲将山火水中燃。 2010-10-9

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-10-09 04:16:42 Post subject:

潜入潭中千尺底，欲将山火水中燃。丹枫影入潭中，似乎将山火煮潭水，比拟新颖恰当。欣赏并问好！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-10-09 08:13:36 Post subject:

把丹楓描绘得活灵活現,"欲将山火水中燃", 极富想象,筆力雄劲! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-10-09 09:51:11 Post subject:

欲将山火水中燃。好比喻！秋枫似火满山燃，流水淙淙奏管弦。何必伤秋悲落叶，缤纷五彩比春天。

昕阳一片
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昕阳一片Collection

Posted: 2010-10-14 03:58:09 Post subject:

谢笑聊版主，白云版主，庆宏版主的鼓励。问好各位版主！

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