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原创《离乡的汉子》-------樱花

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Posted: 2010-10-06 15:13:32 Post subject: 原创《离乡的汉子》-------樱花

原创《离乡的汉子》九月最后的夜里与你相聚在荧屏里沧桑挂满你瘦弱的脸庞思念牵出的泪光在眼底泛起失落的夜空屏蔽了寂静泥土抖动了多年沉睡的身躯十个离家的汉子拨动着松花江的琴弦演奏出思乡的夜曲 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2010-10-06 18:18:31 Post subject:

失落的夜空屏蔽了寂静泥土抖动了多年沉睡的身躯十个离家的汉子拨动着松花江的琴弦演奏出思乡的夜曲 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2010-10-06 20:43:19 Post subject: 回复

谢谢老师光临。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2010-10-07 10:39:36 Post subject:

一首浓浓的深深的思乡夜曲! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-10-08 03:52:04 Post subject: 回复

谢谢老师的点评。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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