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原创《离乡的汉子》-------樱花
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 15:13:32    Post subject: 原创《离乡的汉子》-------樱花 Reply with quote

原创《离乡的汉子》

九月最后的夜里

与你相聚在荧屏里

沧桑挂满你瘦弱的脸庞

思念牵出的泪光

在眼底泛起



失落的夜空

屏蔽了寂静 泥土

抖动了多年沉睡的身躯

十个离家的汉子 拨动

着松花江的琴弦

演奏出思乡的夜曲
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 18:18:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

失落的夜空

屏蔽了寂静 泥土

抖动了多年沉睡的身躯

十个离家的汉子 拨动

着松花江的琴弦

演奏出思乡的夜曲
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 20:43:19    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

谢谢老师光临。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-07 10:39:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

一首浓浓的深深的思乡夜曲!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-08 03:52:04    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

谢谢老师的点评。
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