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《别离》
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PostPosted: 2010-10-05 00:43:26    Post subject: 《别离》 Reply with quote

《别离》
驾着飞驰的车

只为与你别离 在

悲切的田野



无奈 无奈的相视

紧紧地握在冰冷的手心里



泪水滑落 落进

你剥开的榛壳里

溢蔓着过去 回忆



轻轻地抽回我的手

任凭你的目光游离在

我的眼底 我已无力

承受这份沉重的别离



把你拒绝在车窗外

含着榛果

挥手带泪 驶去



2010年10月3日
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 05:45:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

写实的抒情。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 15:07:55    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

谢谢老师的点评。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-09 03:00:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤别离~~
多情自古伤离别。更那堪、冷落清秋节~~这个时节~易感伤~
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PostPosted: 2010-10-10 01:29:11    Post subject: 回复: Reply with quote

谢谢老师光临!
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