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行香子-丹霞日出
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 03:49:20    Post subject: 行香子-丹霞日出 Reply with quote

文/笑聊 并和白云兄《行香子》

戴月披星,观日之行。正秋风、瑟瑟无情。丹霞极目,为顾光明。盼骄阳出、群山显、彩霞凝。

远山耸立,莲现花盈。恁神工、巧夺天成。初升红日,万国才醒。但云如海、峰如削、念如应。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 07:35:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,深夜两叁点鐘便起床赶路,去覌日出,真是戴月披星!
謝謝唱和!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 08:22:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄好词。
遥观远山,近看松立。与笑聊兄商榷,远近观感不同。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 17:59:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄好词。
遥观远山,近看松立。与笑聊兄商榷,远近观感不同。


庆宏兄所言不错松为耸之误。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 18:04:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
笑聊,深夜两叁点鐘便起床赶路,去覌日出,真是戴月披星!
謝謝唱和!


问好白云兄!是的,那天观日出,真的很辛苦。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-07 06:19:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,深夜起床是辛苦,却换來举世知名的观日出,很值得!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-08 04:25:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
笑聊,深夜起床是辛苦,却换來举世知名的观日出,很值得!


是的白云兄,在旅游团中,年龄大的七十出头,他们的游兴都很高。能看到日出与云海,真的很幸运。感谢造物主带来如此壮观景象!
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