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《雁南飞》-------樱花
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PostPosted: 2010-10-03 04:23:14    Post subject: 《雁南飞》-------樱花 Reply with quote

《雁南飞》-------樱花
秋风驾驭着时光的列车
碾碎了百花 碾黄了树叶
也碾红了晚霞

呼啸而至
惊醒了妈妈怀里的雏雁
稚嫩的羽毛 带
着妈妈的体温
抖落了星辰

远方的弯月 招
唤着黎明 雄鸡
的一声呜啼 排列
了南行的雁队

仰望天上的羽毛
随风 随着云朵 飘向
了温暖 空旷的田野
留下一串冰冷的泪水 和
一行孤独的脚印


{这首诗歌写于女儿回河北的下午,望着孩子弱不禁风的样子,这么小就要走进残酷的生活,内心非常的难过,想了很多很多、、、、、}|
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PostPosted: 2010-10-03 18:13:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

儿行千里母担忧
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PostPosted: 2010-10-04 00:35:59    Post subject: 回复:白水老师 Reply with quote

谢谢老师的光临。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-05 07:16:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗风婉約! 母女情深!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-05 22:16:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

情到深时,自然浮想联翩啊.
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PostPosted: 2010-10-06 00:49:00    Post subject: 回复:各位老师 Reply with quote

谢谢各位老师的点评。谢谢
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