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写首小诗，问好和诗歌有缘的朋友们

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Posted: 2010-09-23 20:49:59 Post subject: 写首小诗，问好和诗歌有缘的朋友们

□ 如果一个人叫白水文／晴宝儿苹果树结满诗歌，世界的苹果正自由生长。白水好吗。也许是一杯浇灌苹果树的白水也许是一个名字如果一个人叫白水他一定干净得像一朵苹果花浇水的小杯子，白白净净被他贴身藏着 2010-9-24 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-09-23 20:54:05 Post subject:

白水的流星雨真美，我这胡乱涂涂，呵呵，送给白水。也问好所有写诗的朋友。 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-09-23 21:32:37 Post subject:

白水 is visiting China now _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:32:44 Post subject:

□ 树上的苹果有的像早收的青柿子，有的已枯萎空洞的苹果像人的头骨什么都没有，空空的两个窟窿有的长成了花瓶，却插不上一枝美丽始终是苹果啊，你忘了有的不能和另一个苹果交谈有的已裂开，骄傲的口子在空气中变黄有的苹果端庄，放荡，光滑，长满凸结仍不肯挂上树梢，长久地在树下磨一个苹果的成熟不亚于一棵树的成长 2010-9-24 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:33:10 Post subject:

□ 种苹果的人他们风餐露宿，有自己的帐篷孤独时要么发呆要么种苹果相见时胡吃海喝，一边调侃一边抽烟他们时常哭时常笑出走时不言语，回家倒头就睡半梦半醒起来挖坑浇水他们大悲，真喜，击中愤怒自成流派，偶尔吵架像争夺爱吃的果子种苹果的人，有抱着苹果遁去的种苹果的人，身体里长着小树林的人无比痛苦，无比幸福。 2010-9-24 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:34:55 Post subject:

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白水 is visiting China now

白水现在在国内呀

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Posted: 2010-09-24 01:24:48 Post subject:

□ 半空中的苹果一个人点头，因为某种真诚或巧合。一群人仰头：哦，superfuirt，多么高贵在枝下走走跳跳晃晃仿佛自己也沾了贵族的光老树弹弹手指，敦厚的木料经得起时间的推敲。老树的碧叶像皇宫的伞风中哗啦啦地响半空中的苹果，尴尬地停在半空上也不是下也不是 2010-9-24 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-09-24 01:55:57 Post subject:

苹果总会给人无限联想~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-09-24 01:56:22 Post subject:

苹果总会给人无限联想~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-09-24 01:57:08 Post subject:

□ 一个苹果的纠结它有细花纹，外形优柔甜或世界毁灭都从核心开始它想放眼风云变幻的战场大而正义的战场可每次苹果花绽开涌出花蕾的都是它咬人的爱情 2010-9-24 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-09-24 01:58:04 Post subject:

苹果总会给人无限联想~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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苹果总会给人无限联想~~

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Posted: 2010-09-26 01:12:12 Post subject:

学习问好！ _________________ 为人总根于心，创作总根于情。 473000河南省南阳市农业银行合规办事处（伏牛路18号）

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Posted: 2010-09-26 23:21:45 Post subject:

一个苹果的成熟不亚于一棵树的成长 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

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Posted: 2010-10-03 18:30:06 Post subject:

宝儿好, 看见你真高兴. 整日游荡, 刚看见你的诗歌, 很喜欢, 谢谢. 本想去西藏, 未能成行, 留下一个遗憾, 下次吧. 改行云南, 至玉龙雪山, 香格里拉, 也算是进藏了吧. 双节快乐.

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Posted: 2010-10-15 01:34:20 Post subject:

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学习问好！

县长好

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一个苹果的成熟不亚于一棵树的成长

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Posted: 2010-10-15 01:39:08 Post subject:

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宝儿好, 看见你真高兴. 整日游荡, 刚看见你的诗歌, 很喜欢, 谢谢.
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白水好,很是想念,抱一下
看到你这么潇洒真让人羡慕
这一趟旅又要带回多少天马行空的诗歌了,更羡慕了 Smile

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