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《秋家小园》
马列福
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 05:40:44    Post subject: 《秋家小园》 Reply with quote

北京丰台区京都轻纺城北1排17号 马列福(100075)

《秋家小园》
黄昏,小院里分外宁静。夕阳斜照进来,又一寸一寸退出去。
起风了,老槐树抖一抖,全身的黄叶唰唰地掉。一些落在院里,一些落在院外的溪里,随清澈的溪水一起慢慢漂远。
一个女人坐在门槛上剥蚕豆,一粒一粒轻轻放进碗里。那些白胖小子瞪大眼睛,乖乖地躺着。
井台边,一个穿开裆裤的小孩追着一只小彩蝶跑,一条小黄狗追着小孩跑。小孩不时看向女人,他笑她也笑。
门忽然被踢开了,一个秃头的男人跳进来,双脚都是泥,扛一把黑锄头。他来到井边,蝴蝶就不见了,小孩就不见了,小黄狗变成了大黄狗,趴在地上,流着口水。
那个男人先打水洗干净脚,然后一下一下地把锄头擦得锃亮。锄头里,他看见屋顶已经升起炊烟袅袅。
一个沙哑的声音喊到:“信!”
男人耳朵一震,扔下锄头,飞进屋里。
被锄头砸醒的大黄狗抬头,看见一群大雁排成人形,飞过小院的上空。大黄狗兴奋地在原地打转,并且叫唤起来……
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 05:46:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

短文,但精练形象!让我想起了废名的惜墨如金。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 20:11:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

客观冷静的素描小品。
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