冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-03-30 10:22:15 Post subject: 七绝·喜相逢 |
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七绝·喜相逢
胸次星罗夜未阑,
征途各各逆风寒。
一朝撵得闲云去,
蝶梦依然燕喏喃。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-03-30 15:40:43 Post subject: |
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蝶梦依然燕喏喃。
有一种自然小巧的洒脱
_________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 00:27:01 Post subject: |
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轻灵俊朗。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-03-31 05:46:32 Post subject: 喜相逢(2) |
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谢谢版主喜欢。
喜相逢(2)
和乐熙熙笑语喃,
殷殷意暖话暄寒。
长河恰似飞仓浪,
百会交欢海样宽。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 07:23:44 Post subject: |
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开心快乐的诗 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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晓松 举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-03-31 08:41:51 Post subject: Re: 七绝·喜相逢 |
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冰清 wrote: |
七绝·喜相逢
胸次星罗夜未阑,
征途各各逆风寒。
一朝撵得闲云去,
蝶梦依然燕喏喃。
喜相逢(2)
和乐熙熙笑语喃,
殷殷意暖话暄寒。
长河恰似飞仓浪,
百会交欢海样宽。
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冰清老师果然出句不凡,放收自如。“蝶梦依然燕喏喃”如何想得出来? |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-02 17:26:02 Post subject: |
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冰清老师, 你的诗歌越写越自如了.问好 |
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梅影三叠 秀才
Joined: 06 Feb 2007 Posts: 203
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Posted: 2007-04-06 22:38:58 Post subject: |
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久不见,问好冰清老师了。。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-04-16 09:23:15 Post subject: |
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谢白水鼓励!
影影,不知为什么,我还没收到你的诗集? |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-16 19:13:46 Post subject: |
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冰清老师, 收到我E-MAIL了吗? |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-04-17 19:54:48 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
冰清老师, 收到我E-MAIL了吗? |
谢谢,你不提醒,我还真没开启。 |
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