林芳萍
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Joined: 20 Sep 2010
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Location: 中国安徽
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 Posted: 2010-09-23 20:31:12 Post subject: ［古风］中秋 |
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中秋
林芳萍
开匣取月张口残，闭蟾隐桂出鼻端。
劲吹黄叶纷纷离，细敲窗棚沙沙传。
昨日空调还嫌热，今朝长袖犹觉寒。
夏消秋长过半岁，冬藏春生又一年。
写于庚寅中秋 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2010-09-24 03:47:19 Post subject: |
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| 古韵新意。 |
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金沙浪子
秀才
Joined: 21 Jul 2008
Posts: 128
Location: 亚洲 中国云南 昭通巧家
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| Posted: 2010-09-24 05:25:17 Post subject: |
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新意新境！
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山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。
过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2010-09-24 10:21:52 Post subject: |
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夏消秋长,冬藏春生,時光荏苒!
問好林芳萍!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-09-24 13:40:56 Post subject: |
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开匣取月张口残，闭蟾隐桂出鼻端。
劲吹黄叶纷纷离，细敲窗棚沙沙传。
昨日空调还嫌热，今朝长袖犹觉寒。
夏消秋长过半岁，冬藏春生又一年。
新奇新意。尤其首联。 |
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林芳萍
童生
Joined: 20 Sep 2010
Posts: 43
Location: 中国安徽
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| Posted: 2010-09-26 21:56:13 Post subject: |
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谢您鼓励！
问好！ |
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林芳萍
童生
Joined: 20 Sep 2010
Posts: 43
Location: 中国安徽
林芳萍Collection |
| Posted: 2010-09-26 21:57:17 Post subject: |
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谢您点赏！
问好！ |
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林芳萍
童生
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Posts: 43
Location: 中国安徽
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| Posted: 2010-09-26 21:58:30 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
夏消秋长,冬藏春生,時光荏苒!
問好林芳萍! |
谢您圈点赏评！
问好！ |
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林芳萍
童生
Joined: 20 Sep 2010
Posts: 43
Location: 中国安徽
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| Posted: 2010-09-26 21:59:40 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊 wrote: |
开匣取月张口残，闭蟾隐桂出鼻端。
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谢您圈点鼓励！
问好！ |
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