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七律辘轳体•木落清风爽气浮

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Posted: 2010-09-16 03:47:50 Post subject: 七律辘轳体•木落清风爽气浮

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Posted: 2010-09-16 04:16:15 Post subject:

好轱辘，欣赏！

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Posted: 2010-09-16 16:19:49 Post subject:

霜天万类昕阳赏,"木落清风爽气浮".欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-09-17 06:54:18 Post subject:

清風明月、桂香楓霞、野鷗飞雁、鳴蝉蛩吟,构成一幅秋图! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-09-18 03:16:31 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

清風明月、桂香楓霞、野鷗飞雁、鳴蝉蛩吟,构成一幅秋图!

欣赏轱辘体佳作，问候昕阳诗友。

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Posted: 2010-09-18 16:53:21 Post subject:

木落清风爽气浮。。别具一格的好轱辘，

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Posted: 2010-09-18 18:12:44 Post subject:

七律轱辘，别具一格。

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:08:26 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

好轱辘，欣赏！

谢笑聊版主鼓励。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:09:12 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

霜天万类昕阳赏,"木落清风爽气浮".欣赏!

谢黄洋界版主鼓励。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:10:04 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

霜天万类昕阳赏,"木落清风爽气浮".欣赏!

谢黄洋界版主鼓励。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:11:27 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

清風明月、桂香楓霞、野鷗飞雁、鳴蝉蛩吟,构成一幅秋图!

谢白云版主青睐。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:12:29 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

白云闲人 wrote:

清風明月、桂香楓霞、野鷗飞雁、鳴蝉蛩吟,构成一幅秋图!

欣赏轱辘体佳作，问候昕阳诗友。

谢家珍老师亲睐。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:13:46 Post subject:

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木落清风爽气浮。。别具一格的好轱辘，

谢sliu6诗友鼓励。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 00:14:43 Post subject:

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七律轱辘，别具一格。

感谢庆宏版主鼓励。问好！

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Posted: 2010-09-24 18:34:37 Post subject:

才华横溢穷天际，五次清风爽气浮。学习、问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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