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秋賦 --- 秋声
白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-09-18 10:40:34    Post subject: 秋賦 --- 秋声 Reply with quote

. . . 秋 声 . . .
<调寄金縷曲>
雨箭隨风弩,
掃平蕪,
残红槁叶,
掉沤无数.
忍听墨鴉啼秋暮,
雁咽声消南浦.
天幕低,
层雲密布.
远岫岚烟笼瀟索,
满湖蒼茫岸摇霜树.
寒影乱,
尽倾訴!

回头迢递千山霧.
笑如今,
蛩吟枯草,
鸟鳴凋圃.
无限唏嘘滄波意,
荏苒流光無語.
唯逐浪,
斜陽独舞.
心曲依從天韵谱,
自引壶觴自編台步.
浮大白,
唱金縷!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-18 16:33:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景交融。。心曲依從天韵谱。。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-09-18 17:58:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

"心曲依从天韵谱",白云优雅舞台步!
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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PostPosted: 2010-09-18 17:59:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

"心曲依从天韵谱",白云优雅舞台步!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 03:32:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

不为环境变化而改变心境!浮大白, 唱金縷!结得好,现豪气!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 04:06:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

一首金縷曲,慷慨人生歌。
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 04:34:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

风格大异前面

不过结尾依旧高扬
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 07:14:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝sliu6欣赏!
荏苒流光滄波意,天韵一曲金縷曲!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 07:19:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝黄兄!
赋心曲,天韵譜,唱金縷,雲舒步!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 07:22:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊!
自引壶觴浮大白,一從天韵金縷曲!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 07:27:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝庆宏!
影照斜陽唯独舞,依從天韵唱金曲!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 07:31:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝影沉寒水!
回头迢递千山霧,唯逐浪自编台步!
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