白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 10:40:34 Post subject: 秋賦 --- 秋声 |
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. . . 秋 声 . . .
<调寄金縷曲>
雨箭隨风弩,
掃平蕪,
残红槁叶,
掉沤无数.
忍听墨鴉啼秋暮,
雁咽声消南浦.
天幕低,
层雲密布.
远岫岚烟笼瀟索,
满湖蒼茫岸摇霜树.
寒影乱,
尽倾訴!
回头迢递千山霧.
笑如今,
蛩吟枯草,
鸟鳴凋圃.
无限唏嘘滄波意,
荏苒流光無語.
唯逐浪,
斜陽独舞.
心曲依從天韵谱,
自引壶觴自編台步.
浮大白,
唱金縷! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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SLIU 秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2010 Posts: 384
SLIUCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 16:33:14 Post subject: |
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情景交融。。心曲依從天韵谱。。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 17:58:50 Post subject: |
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"心曲依从天韵谱",白云优雅舞台步! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 17:59:21 Post subject: |
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"心曲依从天韵谱",白云优雅舞台步! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 03:32:50 Post subject: |
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不为环境变化而改变心境!浮大白, 唱金縷!结得好,现豪气! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 04:06:01 Post subject: |
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一首金縷曲,慷慨人生歌。 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 04:34:41 Post subject: |
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风格大异前面
不过结尾依旧高扬 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 07:14:14 Post subject: |
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謝謝sliu6欣赏!
荏苒流光滄波意,天韵一曲金縷曲! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 07:19:17 Post subject: |
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謝黄兄!
赋心曲,天韵譜,唱金縷,雲舒步! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 07:22:40 Post subject: |
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謝笑聊!
自引壶觴浮大白,一從天韵金縷曲! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 07:27:14 Post subject: |
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謝庆宏!
影照斜陽唯独舞,依從天韵唱金曲! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-19 07:31:20 Post subject: |
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謝影沉寒水!
回头迢递千山霧,唯逐浪自编台步! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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