JEFFYANG 童生
Joined: 09 Sep 2010 Posts: 4
JEFFYANGCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-13 21:41:51 Post subject: 《念奴嬌.再聚舊情人》 |
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《念奴嬌.再聚舊情人》
矜持依旧
几雍容
含媚拢撩肩发
潸然再见江汉楼
春华匆匆已跨
苦酽名茶
弦乐忧伴
遥诉当年嫁
含怨吐幽
心慰夫敬女姹
重忆当年聚散
怎无微词
悔责不能罢
执意青骢出远关
红颜獨守尴尬
绝了音容
无觅踪迹
相害牵肠挂
不堪回首
唯将此情入画 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-14 06:36:53 Post subject: |
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唯将此情入画. 结得好! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-15 20:38:35 Post subject: |
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欣赏佳作,问候JEFFYANG诗友。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 08:22:15 Post subject: |
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旧情难忘。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 16:26:23 Post subject: |
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怎堪回首,再现幽情. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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