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四季歌 ( 四 )
白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-09-11 13:12:42    Post subject: 四季歌 ( 四 ) Reply with quote
. . . 冬 雪. . .
<调寄定風波>
白雪銀花筆上开,
烟峦雲幅纸中裁.
慢步小园灵感应,
更静,
凭窗賞景度詞牌.

叠叠風歌乘雅興,
吟咏,
飘飞韵律调和谐.
粉蝶缤纷隨起舞,
情愫,
诗中岁月逸情怀!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-09-11 14:39:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
上片用白云兄词（稍做改动）下片相和填《鹧鸪天》词

白雪銀花筆上开,
烟峦雲幅纸中裁.
飘飞韵律云中荡.
慢步幽园灵感来。

观素裹，展诗才。
满眸尽是白皑皑。
冷风卷起银龙舞，
书写壮歌显露怀。
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王国栋
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 01:17:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习了，问好！
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金沙浪子
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 01:59:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
浪子也学习诗中好句！
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山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。
过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 03:23:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
凭窗賞景度詞牌

这才是生活
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 08:20:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
謝笑聊和詞!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 08:21:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
謝王国棟欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 08:22:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
謝謝金沙浪子!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 08:24:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
謝影沉寒水雅評!
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