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卜算子-春愁（集句）二

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Posted: 2010-09-11 14:41:37 Post subject: 卜算子-春愁（集句）二

集宋词句/笑聊寂寞下芙城，秦观-满庭芳今夜山深处。毛滂-惜分飞侬是嵚崎可笑人，辛弃疾-浣溪纱萧索江城暮。柳永-竹马子把酒问青天：苏轼-水调歌头几度黄昏雨？晏几道-御街行花自飘零水自流，李清照-一剪梅无计留春住。欧阳修-蝶恋花

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Posted: 2010-09-12 00:55:06 Post subject:

哥最近一直在读宋词，弟建议读《宋词鉴赏》，那本书很不错。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-09-12 02:11:38 Post subject:

笑聊老师不错的集句！ _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

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Posted: 2010-09-12 08:14:48 Post subject:

集句成趣! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-09-12 16:16:32 Post subject:

王国栋 wrote:

哥最近一直在读宋词，弟建议读《宋词鉴赏》，那本书很不错。

谢谢贤弟推荐，愚兄记下了。

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Posted: 2010-09-12 16:20:19 Post subject:

金沙浪子 wrote:

笑聊老师不错的集句！

老师不敢当。你我都是喜欢诗词而走到一起。浪子兄又好久没来了，多多保重！

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Posted: 2010-09-12 16:22:53 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

集句成趣!

都说集句难，我这也是逼迫自己，顺便也在玩。问候白云兄！

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Posted: 2010-09-14 04:49:38 Post subject:

与《卜算子》前后第二、第四句相同的词牌（这句有语病，就这样吧）—— 《生查子》前后第二、第四句；《误佳期》前后第四句及后第二句；《惜分飞》前后第三句；《南歌子》前后第一句；《醉花阴》前后第二、第五句；《虞美人》前后第二句；《蝶恋花》前后第三句；《河传》后第三句；《苏幕遮》前后第四、第七句；《锦缠道》前后末句；《青玉案》前后末句；《千秋岁》前后第六句及前第一句；《御街行》前后末句；《蓦山溪》前后第二、第九句；《烛影摇红》第四句。我不懂词，比着《汉语诗律学》打出来，供笑聊老弟参考。

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Posted: 2010-09-14 05:27:07 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

与《卜算子》前后第二、第四句相同的词牌（这句有语病，就这样吧）——
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谢谢老哥雪中送炭！愚弟记下了。

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Posted: 2010-09-14 16:30:11 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

王国栋 wrote:

哥最近一直在读宋词，弟建议读《宋词鉴赏》，那本书很不错。

谢谢贤弟推荐，愚兄记下了。

问好笑聊贤弟！我的《唐宋词鉴赏辞典》只有上卷，从李白截止到李清照。李清照之后的，我只好从网上看，下面是《宋词鉴赏辞典》网址——
http://www.sgwritings.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=19113&extra=page%3D1

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Posted: 2010-09-14 18:47:29 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

王国栋 wrote:

哥最近一直在读宋词，弟建议读《宋词鉴赏》，那本书很不错。

谢谢贤弟推荐，愚兄记下了。

问好笑聊贤弟！我的《唐宋词鉴赏辞典》只有上卷，从李白截止到李清照。李清照之后的，我只好从网上看，下面是《宋词鉴赏辞典》网址——
...

谢谢老哥，费心了。收藏，慢慢学习。再谢！

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