笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-09 04:50:06 Post subject: 卜算子-无题(集句) |
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集宋词句/笑聊
双蝶绣罗裙, (张先-醉垂鞭)
寂寞无人见。 (苏轼-永遇乐)
一片春愁待酒浇, (蒋捷-一剪梅)
到此成游宦。 (柳永-迷神行)
江晚正愁余, (辛弃疾-菩萨蛮)
放晓晴庭院。 (李元膺-洞仙歌)
彩袖殷勤捧玉钟, (晏几道-鹧鸪天)
曾侍瑶池宴。 (张抡-烛影摇红) |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-09 06:43:18 Post subject: |
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集得齐韵! 笑聊博览诗詞,摘句成趣! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2010-09-09 08:25:43 Post subject: |
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集句词比集句诗更难,特别是要扣主题。笑聊兄真是有心人! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-09 14:45:09 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
集得齐韵! 笑聊博览诗詞,摘句成趣! |
谢白云兄赞誉鼓励!集句词比集句诗要难许多。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-09 14:49:35 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
集句词比集句诗更难,特别是要扣主题。笑聊兄真是有心人! |
庆宏兄说的不错,“集句词比集句诗更难,特别是要扣主题。”我这也是摸索学习兼玩儿。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-10 02:23:33 Post subject: |
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很有心的
集这么多 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-10 16:16:21 Post subject: |
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好玩,这也是一种创造.感觉还要难些。 |
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