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天堂里如果有车来往
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 16:08:40    Post subject: 天堂里如果有车来往 Reply with quote

天堂里如果有车来往
哥哥,我一定把您探望
话凄凉,泪成行
告诉哥,您的遗愿已完成
腊月二十九
弟赶到乡下
含着泪把工钱发给60个兄弟
在那些悲壮的哭声中
弟明白了“信义”两个字
重如千斤

杨柳青了,稻花又飘香
今年的中秋节
弟会把您最喜欢吃的月饼
放在您床前
诉说对您无穷的思念
多少次梦里忆起小时的情景
您拉着我的手
下雨天共撑一把雨伞
梦醒了
泪湿枕边

一幕幕往事
如一池春水
掀起波澜
哥,您的教诲
弟会铭刻在心间
您就像一棵树
一棵正直 伟岸的白杨树
扎根在人们心中
永远苍翠欲滴
滴成一首流传千古的诗

“信义”二字
会刻在石头上
与日月同辉
弟把对您无尽的思念
锁在梦里
抖落满地的忧伤
山河会为您祈福
天亮了,擦干泪
继续赶路
谱写一曲“信义”故事的明天
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 23:23:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

歌颂好人的——很有感情!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 23:52:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
歌颂好人的——很有感情!

山城子老师体会得完全正确,握手!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 19:05:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

真情感人
标题再新意一点会更好些。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 20:22:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
真情感人
标题再新意一点会更好些。

谢谢朋友指点,我再修改完善。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 05:43:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

倒下去的哥哥依然站立着~~高大伟岸~~~
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 15:07:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

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倒下去的哥哥依然站立着~~高大伟岸~~~

谢谢朋友分享!
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