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四季歌 ( 一 )
白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 10:10:52    Post subject: 四季歌 ( 一 ) Reply with quote

. . . 春 色 . . .
<调寄鹧鸪天>
濛濛丝雨润如酥,
烟光草色缀平蕪.
春江鴨綠漣漪荡,
杨柳鵝黄袅娜徐!

甘露布,
玉珠鋪,
晓霞散綺绕城都.
桃花新水迎鷗鹭,
巧夺天工绘秀图!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 13:45:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
楓乡春色宜人.好雨知時节,当春乃发生.濛濛丝雨滋润万物生机.一望无际的平蕪,烟光草色.碧綠的江水荡漾陣陣涟漪,溫馨的陽光下,嫩黄的杨柳枝在徐徐春风中起舞,袅娜多姿!
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巧夺天公,公,疑为工。系指下误。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 17:15:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

春意盎然,如临其境。。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 06:50:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊! "公"与"工"筆誤.
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 06:53:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝sliu6雅評!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 14:11:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

. . . . 春. . . .
<调寄鹧鸪天>
濛濛丝雨润如酥,
烟光草色缀平蕪.
春江鴨綠漣漪荡,
杨柳鵝黄袅娜徐!

甘露布,
玉珠鋪,
晓霞散綺绕城都.
桃花新水迎鷗鹭,
巧夺天工绘秀图!

在白云兄笔下,有写不完的自然风光。赞叹!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 06:57:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊美誉!
其实只是自己深感:

常在山水中,
净思襟欢松.
远却尘凡囂,
自乐老还童!
空即乃是色,
色即乃是空.
人生何求冀?
懶去問穷通!

故此,自己便将筆墨宜情予山水之中!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 14:58:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
謝笑聊美誉!
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向往之,只是为稻粱谋而心不定,可见修为功力。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 16:18:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,只要心向往,堅持点点修,可得点点为!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 17:29:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

今日教师节,祝福白云兄长安康愉快!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 17:55:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

春江杨柳,桃花鸥鹭。。。好一幅巧夺天工春江图!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 07:08:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好笑聊!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 07:10:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏美誉!
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