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也是烛影摇红
白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-27 09:31:32    Post subject: 也是烛影摇红 Reply with quote

也是烛影摇红

淹没我的,是你
疲惫的目光
再敲一下键盘就是明天了
你, 还在昨夜
缝制嫁衣, 为缪斯的婚床
把心事儿密密麻麻地绣进针脚
一滴血真能绽开一瓣梅么?
我细细地数, 在梦中

西窗的烛是何时灭的
我不得而知
晨雾袅袅
掀开一抹羞涩的盖头
却听见梅在笑
倦, 无声
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PostPosted: 2007-03-27 10:31:43    Post subject: Re: 也是烛影摇红 Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
也是烛影摇红

西窗的烛是何时灭的
我不得而知
晨雾袅袅
掀开一抹羞涩的盖头
却听见梅在笑
倦, 无声


不管是敲键盘,还是缝嫁衣,你都忙得天昏地暗的哟.可是要注重身体,别太晚了.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-27 18:36:15    Post subject: Re: 也是烛影摇红 Reply with quote

刘雨萍 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
也是烛影摇红

西窗的烛是何时灭的
我不得而知
晨雾袅袅
掀开一抹羞涩的盖头
却听见梅在笑
倦, 无声


不管是敲键盘,还是缝嫁衣,你都忙得天昏地暗的哟.可是要注重身体,别太晚了.


谢谢你, 雨萍. Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 04:57:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言细密,小巧。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 05:15:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗人生活一种,经常的一种:)
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 05:33:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

大概都只有夜深人静的时候,才能仔细体味内心~问好月光妹妹,注意休息! Very Happy
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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 20:30:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,没有什么比平静的心,淡淡的情,更让灵魂安妥。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 00:59:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

古今交融的情韵。犹如随手写下的日记小品,有味。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 10:22:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
语言细密,小巧。


冲浪, 你罢笔了么? 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 19:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
诗人生活一种,经常的一种:)


看来你也这样 Cool
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 19:57:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
大概都只有夜深人静的时候,才能仔细体味内心~问好月光妹妹,注意休息! Very Happy

谢谢月亮 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 20:02:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:
呵呵,没有什么比平静的心,淡淡的情,更让灵魂安妥。


平静为安, 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 20:10:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马策风 wrote:
古今交融的情韵。犹如随手写下的日记小品,有味。


近日是有点复古了 Embarassed
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