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也是烛影摇红

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-27 09:31:32 Post subject: 也是烛影摇红

也是烛影摇红淹没我的,是你疲惫的目光再敲一下键盘就是明天了你, 还在昨夜缝制嫁衣, 为缪斯的婚床把心事儿密密麻麻地绣进针脚一滴血真能绽开一瓣梅么? 我细细地数, 在梦中西窗的烛是何时灭的我不得而知晨雾袅袅掀开一抹羞涩的盖头却听见梅在笑倦, 无声

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2007-03-27 10:31:43 Post subject: Re: 也是烛影摇红

白水 Moonlight wrote:

也是烛影摇红

西窗的烛是何时灭的
我不得而知
晨雾袅袅
掀开一抹羞涩的盖头
却听见梅在笑
倦, 无声

不管是敲键盘,还是缝嫁衣,你都忙得天昏地暗的哟.可是要注重身体,别太晚了.
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白水
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Posted: 2007-03-27 18:36:15 Post subject: Re: 也是烛影摇红

刘雨萍 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

也是烛影摇红

西窗的烛是何时灭的
我不得而知
晨雾袅袅
掀开一抹羞涩的盖头
却听见梅在笑
倦, 无声

不管是敲键盘,还是缝嫁衣,你都忙得天昏地暗的哟.可是要注重身体,别太晚了.

谢谢你, 雨萍.

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Posted: 2007-03-28 04:57:37 Post subject:

语言细密，小巧。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-03-28 05:15:48 Post subject:

诗人生活一种，经常的一种：） _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-03-28 05:33:28 Post subject:

大概都只有夜深人静的时候，才能仔细体味内心~问好月光妹妹,注意休息!

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-03-28 20:30:49 Post subject:

呵呵，没有什么比平静的心，淡淡的情，更让灵魂安妥。 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-03-29 00:59:20 Post subject:

古今交融的情韵。犹如随手写下的日记小品，有味。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-03-29 10:22:07 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

语言细密，小巧。

冲浪, 你罢笔了么? 问好

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Posted: 2007-03-29 19:56:15 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

诗人生活一种，经常的一种：）

看来你也这样

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Posted: 2007-03-29 19:57:11 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

大概都只有夜深人静的时候，才能仔细体味内心~问好月光妹妹,注意休息! Very Happy

谢谢月亮

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Posted: 2007-03-29 20:02:09 Post subject:

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:

呵呵，没有什么比平静的心，淡淡的情，更让灵魂安妥。

平静为安, 问好

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Posted: 2007-03-29 20:10:47 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

古今交融的情韵。犹如随手写下的日记小品，有味。

近日是有点复古了

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