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陶然山水 ( 八 )
白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 11:06:38    Post subject: 陶然山水 ( 八 ) Reply with quote

. 陶然山水 .
<调寄一七令>
看,
秋色,
斑斕!
呈画意,
奉诗篇.
丹楓紅遍,
垂楊金顏.
菊黄尤爛漫,
桂子更嫣然.
自在翠莺婉囀,
高歌雁展南天.
爍爍河汉娟娟月,
山明水秀醉桃源!

<这一輯"陶然山水"暫写到此,請朋友們多多指导.謝謝!>
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 02:36:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

不日八首

佩服

问好
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诗无涯。思在线
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 03:28:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云兄笔下,即便写秋,也是阳光灿烂,秋高气爽。值得学习。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 05:41:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云老师,写景高手。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 07:49:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝影沉寒水鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 07:52:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,相互切磋,活跃生活!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 07:54:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏美誉!
人在山水中,净思乐无穷!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 14:47:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

“金字塔”诗,很精彩,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 07:14:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝王国栋勉励!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 04:12:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

厉害,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 09:11:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝叶英兒美誉!
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