白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-04 11:06:38 Post subject: 陶然山水 ( 八 ) |
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. 陶然山水 .
<调寄一七令>
看,
秋色,
斑斕!
呈画意,
奉诗篇.
丹楓紅遍,
垂楊金顏.
菊黄尤爛漫,
桂子更嫣然.
自在翠莺婉囀,
高歌雁展南天.
爍爍河汉娟娟月,
山明水秀醉桃源!
<这一輯"陶然山水"暫写到此,請朋友們多多指导.謝謝!> _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 02:36:25 Post subject: |
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不日八首
佩服
问好 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 03:28:54 Post subject: |
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白云兄笔下,即便写秋,也是阳光灿烂,秋高气爽。值得学习。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2010-09-05 05:41:30 Post subject: |
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白云老师,写景高手。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 07:49:23 Post subject: |
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謝謝影沉寒水鼓励! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 07:52:16 Post subject: |
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笑聊,相互切磋,活跃生活! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 07:54:49 Post subject: |
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謝謝庆宏美誉!
人在山水中,净思乐无穷! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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王国栋 秀才

Joined: 09 Jul 2010 Posts: 295 Location: 陕西西安 王国栋Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 14:47:50 Post subject: |
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“金字塔”诗,很精彩,学习了。 _________________ 文学是一棵树,我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-06 07:14:01 Post subject: |
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謝王国栋勉励! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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叶英儿 秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 577 Location: 中国 叶英儿Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-07 04:12:58 Post subject: |
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厉害,学习了。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-07 09:11:29 Post subject: |
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謝叶英兒美誉! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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