影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-09-03 05:14:31 Post subject: 七律。咏陶渊明（新韵） |
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七律。咏陶渊明（新韵）
七尺昂藏皆逸气，平生取道灿诗篇。
不由风骨媚尘世，了赞容仪胜地仙。
别爱青山仁度影，常栖绿水智安禅。
篱花一宿结脂梦，人海千年琥珀烟。
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-09-03 06:18:48 Post subject: |
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篱花一宿结脂梦，人海千年琥珀烟。
五柳亮节高风！ |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2010-09-03 06:27:22 Post subject: |
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豪迈,飘逸!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-09-03 07:07:04 Post subject: |
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| 风骨千秋在，田园万古芳。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-09-04 02:37:49 Post subject: |
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各位周末好
谢谢阅读
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王国栋
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Joined: 09 Jul 2010
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| Posted: 2010-09-05 03:02:47 Post subject: |
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对仗工稳，学习了。
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叶英儿
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| Posted: 2010-09-07 04:21:28 Post subject: 学习了。 |
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| 学习了。 |
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