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渔家傲－题赏花图

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-03-29 00:43:18 Post subject: 渔家傲－题赏花图

慵卧小窗观燕戏，暖风着桃红妆衣。雅兴不来难追觅。新景丽，三春柳色轻灵碧。闲坐凝神诗意拟，休闻室外欢歌起。眉蹙赋文常旧忆。寻童迹，浓稠酣梦依稀记。

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Posted: 2007-03-29 10:06:59 Post subject:

MM写的愈来愈好了, 钦佩你的精神

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Posted: 2007-03-29 10:56:48 Post subject:

我好喜欢；））问好滢雪。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-03-29 15:35:49 Post subject: Re: 渔家傲－题赏花图

莹雪 wrote:

慵卧小窗观燕戏，暖风着桃红妆衣。
雅兴不来难追觅。新景丽，三春柳色轻灵碧。

闲坐凝神诗意拟，休闻室外欢歌起。
眉蹙赋文常旧忆。寻童迹，浓稠酣梦依稀记。

后两句，一下子把意境拓展开去。欣赏+学习。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-03-29 17:23:26 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM写的愈来愈好了, 钦佩你的精神

谢谢ＧＧ鼓励！以后还望ＧＧ多多指点 thanks

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-03-29 17:25:41 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

我好喜欢；））

问好滢雪。。。

Laughing

谢谢kokho！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-03-29 17:29:18 Post subject: Re: 渔家傲－题赏花图

晓松 wrote:

后两句，一下子把意境拓展开去。欣赏+学习。

“学习”不敢当哦，谢谢松版关注！ thanks

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Posted: 2007-03-29 17:42:58 Post subject:

闲坐凝神诗意拟，休闻室外欢歌起。眉蹙赋文常旧忆。寻童迹，浓稠酣梦依稀记. MM, 这几句让我非常感动. 真实的情感, 顽强的精神, 相比之下那些无病呻吟显得多么单薄.

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Posted: 2007-03-31 00:38:26 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

闲坐凝神诗意拟，休闻室外欢歌起。
眉蹙赋文常旧忆。寻童迹，浓稠酣梦依稀记.
MM, 这几句让我非常感动. 真实的情感, 顽强的精神, 相比之下那些无病呻吟显得多么单薄.

ＧＧ过誉啦

我只是有感而发，千万别这么说 shhhh

人家会难过的

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