笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-08-26 04:57:02 Post subject: (原创)画堂春-秋枫和白云兄 |
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读白云兄如此美词,怎能不感怀即兴而赋?
晴空云淡柳如风
穿梭彩蝶霓虹
小桥流水向南东
翠鸟鸣空
婉转轻吟如意
登高怀远苍穹
残阳尽染满山枫
一片秋红
附白云兄原玉:
《 画 堂 春 》
牡丹芍药俏红妆,
娇娆紫間鵝黄.
小园写意醉徜徉,
衣袖留芳!
闲賞蝶穿花浪,
细听鶯唱清腔.
晨昏禪定点炉香,
恬淡安祥! |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-08-26 07:43:41 Post subject: |
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翠鸟鳴空、
彩蝶霓虹.
小桥流水、
满山楓红,
好美的景.融融的意!
謝謝和詞! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-08-26 18:17:52 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云兄鼓励雅评! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-08-27 02:51:51 Post subject: |
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合时节
笑聊捷才 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-08-27 05:53:16 Post subject: |
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谢寒水赞誉点评! |
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