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七绝《仲夏荷香》（重庆华岩寺赏荷）[图]

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-08-19 06:55:37 Post subject: 七绝《仲夏荷香》（重庆华岩寺赏荷）[图]

仲夏荷香晴好荷塘苔径窄匆匆步履觅清池盈盈一水浮红靥最忆西窗剪烛时 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-08-19 08:27:08 Post subject:

仲夏荷香自画来。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-08-19 14:16:23 Post subject:

最忆西窗剪烛时、、、、、、余音缭绕，不绝于耳。问好黄老师！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-08-19 17:49:05 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏,笑聊赏读,我初学摄影,儿子加工, 见笑了!为了配图,我把一首旧作稍加改动, 放在这里了. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-08-20 02:42:13 Post subject:

盈盈一水浮红靥最忆西窗剪烛时最忆佳人 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-08-20 17:22:35 Post subject:

谢寒水雅赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-08-25 13:06:25 Post subject:

荷香景美,情绵诗婉! 黄兄,绘画、攝影、吟诗皆精! 羡慕! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-08-26 03:10:23 Post subject:

白云兄过誉了,在下,自当努力.谢谢! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-08-27 06:25:15 Post subject:

晴好荷塘苔径窄匆匆步履觅清池盈盈一水浮红靥最忆西窗剪烛时激赏好绝，问候黄洋界老师。

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Posted: 2010-08-27 16:57:37 Post subject:

谢谢雅赏.秋安! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-08-28 04:55:55 Post subject:

什么是亭亭玉立？看黄老师拍的照片。旧作相和：佳人俏立翠池傍，漫舞芳姿浴水塘。皓腕轻推情谊雅，媚波含露曲回肠。绿裙风动嫣然笑，红粉雾侵潇洒藏。丝竹悠悠声映月，几家玉笔觅诗狂？

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Posted: 2010-08-28 07:49:31 Post subject:

笑聊之拟人手法,妙!!! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-08-28 10:56:18 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

什么是亭亭玉立？看黄老师拍的照片。
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荷花出水美人来。

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