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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

如意葫芦Collection
PostPosted: 2010-08-24 05:56:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

  
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白云闲人
探花


Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 07:43:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情画意曲音.曲妙画美诗婉!
問好如意!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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莹雪
进士出身


Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 16:15:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,欣赏佳作!
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黄洋界
探花


Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 18:00:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

微风,炊烟,燕燕,柳绵,鹂语,罗帕女,"相逢者"
画面有限,想象无边!
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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笑聊
探花


Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 18:21:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

如意葫芦 wrote:
 
  舒颜滴露嫩波芳,暗渡香风扑庙堂。
  一寸巧针一根线,牵来纤手绣文章。
  
  《周礼 考工记》注:“青与赤谓之文,赤与白谓之章。”

 


一寸巧针一根线,牵来纤手绣文章。 想象无限!
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-25 14:03:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
诗情画意曲音.曲妙画美诗婉!
問好如意!


谢谢白云闲人先生!
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

如意葫芦Collection
PostPosted: 2010-08-25 14:04:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
呵呵,欣赏佳作!


谢谢莹雪姐姐!
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

如意葫芦Collection
PostPosted: 2010-08-25 14:04:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
微风,炊烟,燕燕,柳绵,鹂语,罗帕女,"相逢者"
画面有限,想象无边!


谢谢黄老师!
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

如意葫芦Collection
PostPosted: 2010-08-25 14:05:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
一寸巧针一根线,牵来纤手绣文章。 想象无限!


谢谢笑聊先生!
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-25 14:09:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

 
  情系柳丝思若烟,波光潋滟胜吴绵。
  丛间翘首谁家女,掩步香莲悔不前。
 
 
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qinghongh
榜眼


Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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PostPosted: 2010-08-25 16:15:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

如意葫芦 wrote:
 
  风穿堂院淡炊烟,燕燕徘徊戏柳绵。
  鹂语缓催罗帕女,相逢一笑凤楼前。
 
 


柳拂水面似霞烟,春意熏人燕缠绵。
遥见岸边持帕女,依依相送凤楼前?
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莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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PostPosted: 2010-08-25 18:25:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

如意葫芦 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
呵呵,欣赏佳作!


谢谢莹雪姐姐!
别客气,多新作哦!
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笑聊
探花


Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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PostPosted: 2010-08-26 03:33:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

如意葫芦 wrote:
 
  藕断丝连心半空,叹无九月菊临风。
  俱怀踪迹疑思久,别有残歌宛转中。
 
 


洁白身心莲藕空,丝连躯断舞清风。
不知秀泪谁家落?道是绵绵话语中。
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2010-08-26 18:42:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

如意葫芦 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
好妹妹,猜想他吃完这葫芦里的药就开通了 Wink


姐姐,这葫芦里装的是什么药? smart

葫芦里的药葫芦知道 Very Happy
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-28 15:25:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
别客气,多新作哦!


不客气,这些作品不是新作,而且不是我的。好像有人怀疑我们跟你有什么关系,真好玩儿
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-28 15:28:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
葫芦里的药葫芦知道 Very Happy


姐姐是说如意葫芦是药葫芦,那……是良药还是毒药呀
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-28 15:40:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
柳拂水面似霞烟,春意熏人燕缠绵。
遥见岸边持帕女,依依相送凤楼前?


  谢庆宏先生雅和!今有旧作一首,恭奉雅赏
 
  雨歇云收柳敛烟,荷塘一带扑香绵。
  容姿渲染闲亭下,虚掩罗巾巧笑前。
 
 
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-28 15:46:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
洁白身心莲藕空,丝连躯断舞清风。
不知秀泪谁家落?道是绵绵话语中。


  谢笑聊先生雅和!今有旧作一首叠韵,恭奉雅赏
 
  藕丝萦守苦心空,梦断花溪散入风。
  玉指如何遮不断,尽将波染袅烟中。
 
 
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莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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PostPosted: 2010-08-28 17:04:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

如意葫芦 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
别客气,多新作哦!


不客气,这些作品不是新作,而且不是我的。好像有人怀疑我们跟你有什么关系,真好玩儿

呵呵,妹妹随意吧,开心哦!呵呵,怀疑就怀疑吧,是挺好玩的。
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如意葫芦
童生


Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34

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PostPosted: 2010-08-30 02:24:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
呵呵,妹妹随意吧,开心哦!呵呵,怀疑就怀疑吧,是挺好玩的。


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