如意葫芦
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Joined: 21 Aug 2010
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 Posted: 2010-08-21 15:21:06 Post subject: 《巡闺捣句》部分作品赏析 |
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《巡闺捣句》中的诗词作品，是品名师先生利用闲暇的时
间，与网络中的女性朋友，从格律的角度，在文字方面的交
流。涵盖了字词韵律方面的写作技巧，从而探讨如何达到最大
程度地表达出写作者的内心世界和情感抒发的问题。
本帖中，如意葫芦名下的作品部分，包括所谓的和作（实
际上是早已搜集在《巡闺捣句》中的作品），均出自品名师先
生之手；赏析部分及音乐、配图出自“臭豆腐作坊”。 |
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-21 15:22:47 Post subject: |
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香肩半掩伏花枝，泪滴筝弦说梦迟。
不是无由恨郎远，只缘今世不逢时。
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如意葫芦
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-21 23:06:12 Post subject: |
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是非心上是非愁，衔此难堪怯话楼。
索泪浸花望穿眼，进修一日隔三秋。
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-21 23:06:58 Post subject: |
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舒颜滴露嫩波芳，暗渡香风扑庙堂。
一寸巧针一根线，牵来纤手绣文章。
《周礼 考工记》注：“青与赤谓之文，赤与白谓之章。”
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-21 23:22:48 Post subject: |
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藕断丝连心半空，叹无九月菊临风。
俱怀踪迹疑思久，别有残歌宛转中。
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-08-22 00:50:36 Post subject: |
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| 如意葫芦 wrote: |
香肩半掩伏花枝，泪滴筝弦说梦迟。
不是无由恨郎远，只缘今世不逢时。
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问好老师！诗画音三绝欣赏。
冒昧观图也凑一绝，供一笑耳：
泪流掩袖伏瑶琴，此曲只因伤透心。
问讯夫君去何处？妾身日夜盼回音。 |
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-22 05:21:45 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊 wrote: |
问好老师！诗画音三绝欣赏。
冒昧观图也凑一绝，供一笑耳：
泪流掩袖伏瑶琴，此曲只因伤透心。
问讯夫君去何处？妾身日夜盼回音。 |
谢笑聊先生赠诗！旧有同韵一首，恭奉雅赏
黛眉织思懒调琴，露枕桃花滴破心。
风送一声香阁里，抛人何处绝来音。
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-22 19:42:25 Post subject: |
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楼上游波觅故芳，遥望妹帐认兄堂。
看移暗掷销魂处，摘臭凝香豆腐章。
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2010-08-22 21:47:37 Post subject: |
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等一字通开放了，放里面一定好看
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-23 16:55:23 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
| 等一字通开放了，放里面一定好看 |
岛老大，啥时候能开通？  |
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如意葫芦
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Joined: 21 Aug 2010
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| Posted: 2010-08-23 16:57:59 Post subject: |
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青螺红树叶舟溪，疾步登高恨眼低。
独立画帘情不倦，云中隐约雁归啼。
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2010-08-23 17:55:18 Post subject: |
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诗中有画,画中有诗,
相得益彰,花开两枝!
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白水
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| Posted: 2010-08-23 19:21:03 Post subject: |
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| 如意葫芦 wrote: |
| hepingdao wrote: |
| 等一字通开放了，放里面一定好看 |
岛老大，啥时候能开通？ |
好妹妹，猜想他吃完这葫芦里的药就开通了  |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2010-08-23 19:35:04 Post subject: |
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我可不是葫芦岛
初步定在下个月开放 
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-08-23 19:42:05 Post subject: |
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| 祝贺岛主一字通即将开放！ |
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-24 05:37:02 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
诗中有画,画中有诗,
相得益彰,花开两枝! |
谢谢黄老师！ |
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如意葫芦
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| Posted: 2010-08-24 05:43:31 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 好妹妹，猜想他吃完这葫芦里的药就开通了 |
姐姐，这葫芦里装的是什么药？  |
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如意葫芦
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Joined: 21 Aug 2010
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| Posted: 2010-08-24 05:46:06 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
我可不是葫芦岛
初步定在下个月开放 |
这一字通不会75“童生”吧？  |
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如意葫芦
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Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Posts: 34
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| Posted: 2010-08-24 05:54:45 Post subject: |
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风穿堂院淡炊烟，燕燕徘徊戏柳绵。
鹂语缓催罗帕女，相逢一笑凤楼前。
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