影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-08-19 03:02:42 Post subject: 七律•新秋步韵杜甫 |
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七律•新秋步韵杜甫
一湾夕照下前峰，满目荷塘向背风。
几处蝉声萧瑟里，谁乡雁阵递迢中。
美人初月伤高阁，星火寒林叹碧空。
妆就巴山何再雨，夜深轻剪点飞蓬。
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-08-19 06:37:43 Post subject: |
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"妆就巴山何再雨,夜深轻剪点飞蓬"
有杜甫悲天悯人,关切民生的情怀.问好!
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-08-19 08:29:13 Post subject: |
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| 杜甫诗圣韵，巴山夜雨时。 |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-08-19 14:13:23 Post subject: |
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一湾夕照下前峰，满目荷塘向背风。
几处蝉声萧瑟里，谁乡雁阵递迢中。
美人初月伤高阁，星火寒林叹碧空。
妆就巴山何再雨，夜深轻剪点飞蓬。
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-08-20 02:41:28 Post subject: |
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谢谢师友们评读
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