白云闲人
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..盛夏的樂章..
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<調寄瑞鹧鸪>
鷗白天蓝脱俗尘 ,
兔肥草嫩趣迷人 。
屋前姹紫芳盈树 ,
园后嫣紅香溢鄰 。
柳舞風姿花弄影 ,
蜂痴依恋蝶缤纷 。
碧空一鷺扶摇上 ,
引領诗情霄汉奔 !
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2010-08-11 16:19:23 Post subject: |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-08-11 18:44:46 Post subject: |
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..盛夏的樂章..
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读美诗，临屏七律依韵和：
气爽天高脱俗尘，吟诗把盏赏花人。
夏荷倜傥婷婷立，凤蝶风流每每邻。
山翠深幽添色彩，湖帆远驶竟缤纷。
金秋取得丰收果，一路高歌一路新。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-08-12 02:32:33 Post subject: |
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续写盛夏情怀美景
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-08-12 06:43:32 Post subject: |
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謝莹雪雅評!
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| Posted: 2010-08-12 06:44:49 Post subject: |
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謝笑聊唱和美诗!
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白云闲人
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謝影沉寒水欣賞!
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