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七绝•咏春(四首)
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 04:05:04    Post subject: 七绝•咏春(四首) Reply with quote

桃花依旧故人归,细雨无声碧柳飞。
小草含情池畔问,谁人执笔画春辉?
  
小草多情碧柳妆,桃花含笑醉斜阳。
邀来蝴蝶风中舞,一缕春辉梦里香。

东君烂漫韵何多,柳剪春风燕掠波。
万朵桃花情款款,溪边笑语映青河。

碧水烟笼翠柳飞,莺声娇语不思归。
春风摇曳牵君梦,一阕新词酒一杯。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 04:38:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

咏春佳作,尤喜第一首:
桃花依旧故人归,细雨无声碧柳飞。
小草含情池畔问,谁人执笔画春辉?
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 04:48:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

这一首我也比较喜欢,哥最近和了好多诗,弟主要是累。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 06:41:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

柳剪春风燕掠波 ... 很美的诗,豐情的意!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 08:32:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏国栋兄咏春好诗。商榷:春辉---春晖,笔误还是可以通用?
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 15:30:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
柳剪春风燕掠波 ... 很美的诗,豐情的意!

谢谢朋友分享。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 15:34:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
欣赏国栋兄咏春好诗。商榷:春辉---春晖,笔误还是可以通用?

春辉,春天的风光。唐诗中也有“歌舞共春辉”。“辉”和“晖”两字相同。
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