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七律-咏荷和莹雪《甘露歌》

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-08-09 18:31:38 Post subject: 七律-咏荷和莹雪《甘露歌》

文/ 笑聊晚来霞净小池傍，俏丽芙蓉出水塘。侧立风骚姿韵雅，斜眸不语也牵肠。腰裙瘦细闲人笑，颜粉亮鲜闺秀藏。箫管谁辞云后月？今宵少舞更疯狂。注：旁通傍。

莹雪
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Posted: 2010-08-09 22:44:32 Post subject:

笑卿兄好诗。欣赏！

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Posted: 2010-08-10 00:19:59 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

笑卿兄好诗。欣赏！

是莹雪你的好词，引发了我的诗兴。谢谢！

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Posted: 2010-08-10 00:40:17 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

笑卿兄好诗。欣赏！

是莹雪你的好词，引发了我的诗兴。谢谢！

彼此，彼此。谢谢笑卿兄！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-08-10 03:33:29 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

笑卿兄好诗。欣赏！

是莹雪你的好词，引发了我的诗兴。谢谢！

彼此，彼此。谢谢笑卿兄！

叠前韵咏荷再和：

佳人俏立翠池傍，漫舞芳姿浴水塘。

皓腕轻推情谊雅，媚波含露曲回肠。

绿裙风动嫣然笑，红粉雾侵潇洒藏。

丝竹悠悠声映月，几家玉笔觅诗狂？

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Posted: 2010-08-10 04:20:52 Post subject:

感觉第二首更好，问哥好！弟参加了一个艺术沙龙的诗评会，准备了好多天，回来又字斟句酌修改，没来这里。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-08-10 04:30:21 Post subject:

王国栋 wrote:

感觉第二首更好，问哥好！弟参加了一个艺术沙龙的诗评会，准备了好多天，回来又字斟句酌修改，没来这里。

问弟好！有几日不见了。我也觉得第二首比前一首好。

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Posted: 2010-08-10 06:58:16 Post subject:

泼墨描繪荷风韵,红粉佳人笑嫣然! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-08-10 08:25:40 Post subject:

好诗好和！

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Posted: 2010-08-10 16:12:42 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

泼墨描繪荷风韵,红粉佳人笑嫣然!

谢白云兄雅评！

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Posted: 2010-08-10 16:13:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

好诗好和！

谢庆宏兄鼓励！

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Posted: 2010-08-17 05:30:58 Post subject:

文/笑聊（三）气爽天高寻美卉，依依不悔老牛塘。金风远道临诗雨，玉露清晨转曲肠。锦鲤回游辞旧日，蜻蜓略点梦新藏。芳泽不晓谁吻顾，半是矜持半是狂。

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Posted: 2010-08-17 05:33:28 Post subject:

文/笑聊临屏次韵咏荷再和：（四）金秋送爽心香吐，俏立姿容雅韵塘。晨露回环裙摆翠，晓风轻拂泪流肠。依依碧柳君随伴，缓缓兰舟客巧藏。三夏难熬今已过，陶公赏菊渐痴狂。

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