笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2010-08-08 20:39:21 Post subject: 鹊桥仙--相思恨苦 |
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朦胧月瘦，迷离星闪，银汉无垠路远。奈年年一度重逢，凭喜鹊、才登彼岸。
依依柔水，相思恨苦，天理何其武断？惜分分秒秒时光，更觉得、艰难深叹！ |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-08-09 12:18:54 Post subject: |
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鵲桥渡银汉,相思登彼岸!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-08-09 17:34:03 Post subject: |
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问白云兄安好！
谢兄雅评！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
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| Posted: 2010-08-09 17:46:51 Post subject: |
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| 幽雅婉转诉情愫。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-08-09 18:58:16 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢莹雪雅评《鹊桥仙》！ |
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qinghongh
榜眼
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| Posted: 2010-08-09 19:03:17 Post subject: |
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| 鹊桥仙，相见难。银河路，迢迢远。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-08-10 00:06:46 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 鹊桥仙，相见难。银河路，迢迢远。 |
谢庆宏兄点评！问好。 |
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