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失眠
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PostPosted: 2010-08-04 18:40:14    Post subject: 失眠 Reply with quote

失眠

作者:山恩



在夜里辗转

夜过于宁静

梦,被掏空了

十个手指无处安放



某处的花开了

夜伸进蚊帐里的手带着花香



有个时钟被撞碎了

秒针一直停在九

不前进,不后退

听惯了秒针走动的人失眠了



一片黑暗

……

明天起来

太阳还会记得我是我吗?





2010-08-04
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PostPosted: 2010-08-04 21:44:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

某处的花开了

夜伸进蚊帐里的手带着花香

很灵动~~~渲染于无形中~~
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PostPosted: 2010-08-04 21:44:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

某处的花开了

夜伸进蚊帐里的手带着花香

很灵动~~~渲染于无形中~~
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chenrunmin
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PostPosted: 2010-08-06 07:14:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

除了最后一段,如果我写,每一断,再发挥,便是一首诗,
问好。
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