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七月三些
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 07:56:53    Post subject: 七月三些 Reply with quote

七月三些


薔薇玫瑰


籬牆看妳淚水,不將妳摘回
露滴兒,莫是風下的懺悔

妳默默,幕衣無奈 ;斜陽穿透
早鳥聲來。殘露遂逐漸蒸發

我若要伸手,薔薇啊薔薇--
妳會刺我不會。妳的風兒是誰

退步看院裡的玫瑰,恃寵兒
貪睡,懶腰枝,得得半城韻味



再說一夏


瘋,子是一個熱粒子
不折不扣精神獨立的粒子

風信,子一個個的
大暑天裡冬眠,不接電話

天,才游離外太空
宇宙便也有了紫藍季包膜

大廈,玻璃帷幕騰騰的弧影
與浮游于肥皂泡沫複眼的蟻


嚇!



季節印戳


野鴨脫襪,江畔鏟雪
杏枝始長乳牙,青梅囁嚅

笑的酒窩啊,一池薄荷魚
天地,清淨流火

想秋水采集斑斕,鵝卵石跳
滿眼是歡天喜地的葉落

還應有那雁聲,收割散地上
最後一片老成持重的蕎麥



[註]新旋律八行
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 08:25:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

退步看院裡的玫瑰,恃寵兒
貪睡,懶腰枝,得得半城韻味

不错 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 19:36:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

模糊运用律诗的粘,對,韵原则
八律句换成八分行,加些自由变化。
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