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诗歌:昨天路过村口

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Posted: 2007-03-27 16:56:15 Post subject: 诗歌:昨天路过村口

昨天路过村口昨天路过村口看到一个年轻的妇人坐在板凳上一边奶着一个胖乎乎的婴孩一边补着一堆破袜子那婴孩脑袋摇晃得像一个拨楞鼓妇人一不小心就被针尖扎了指头血滴在干瘪的乳房上红得耀眼婴孩浑然不觉我心里蓦地一疼 2007.3. _________________ 风上面还是风更乱更强

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Posted: 2007-03-27 16:58:14 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-03-29 04:26:44 Post subject:

很动人的场面，诗意弱了些。 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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