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王国栋
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 01:18:35    Post subject: 七绝.无题 Reply with quote
醉卧枫林数落花，熏风拂面日西斜。
白云深解青山意，一缕清愁一缕纱。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 05:56:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
[quote="王国栋"]醉卧枫林数落花，清风拂面日西斜。
白云深解青山意，一缕清愁一缕纱。[/quot


寓意清新，立意深远，好诗！清字减一个。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 06:21:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
一缕清愁一缕纱
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 06:23:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
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醉卧枫林数落花，清风拂面日西斜。
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第一个“清”已经修改为“熏”，谢哥指点。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 06:24:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
影沉寒水 wrote:
一缕清愁一缕纱

晚上好，朋友。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 16:42:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习美绝！！！
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 20:14:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
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学习美绝！！！

谢谢老师鼓励！
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