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五律•毕业多年仍感尘心缥缈（新韵）

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-07-31 03:17:17 Post subject: 五律•毕业多年仍感尘心缥缈（新韵）

五律•毕业多年仍感尘心缥缈（新韵）一去三山月，多年愧雅音。惶惶追道藏，渺渺展胸襟。魏晋尘中远，松竹槛外深。高山流水命，缓缓效云心。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-07-31 06:00:31 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

五律•毕业多年仍感尘心缥缈（新韵）
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寒水兄读的佛学院？

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Posted: 2010-07-31 06:59:34 Post subject:

高山流水命，缓缓效云心。

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Posted: 2010-08-01 06:22:12 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

影沉寒水 wrote:

五律•毕业多年仍感尘心缥缈（新韵）
...

寒水兄读的佛学院？

不是的
_________________
诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-08-01 06:27:09 Post subject:

对仗工稳！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-08-01 14:43:18 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

影沉寒水 wrote:

五律•毕业多年仍感尘心缥缈（新韵）
...

寒水兄读的佛学院？

不是的

新韵临屏和：
凡眸处处尘，勤拭觉台灵。
太岳离天远，琴箫少和音。
青山随绿水，仲夏吵蛙声。
频洗惶惶事，悠悠效力心。

寒水兄指正。

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Posted: 2010-08-02 04:35:37 Post subject:

谢谢赐和不过问题蛮多哦 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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