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绚烂、轰炸、春天（三首）

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Posted: 2007-03-24 10:54:46 Post subject: 绚烂、轰炸、春天（三首）

1 粉红色的炸弹炸的春天到处都是绚烂的色彩少女冲上前线粉红色的军团轻轻喘息让时间轻盈阳光清澈温暖灿烂 2 很多花温柔的爆炸春天正在风中通过 3 空掉了时间是个透明的壳樱花开了等着落春天宁肯死去不等我 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-03-24 20:05:37 Post subject:

少女冲上前线粉红色的军团轻轻喘息让时间轻盈好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-03-24 21:47:33 Post subject:

很有新意

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Posted: 2007-03-26 03:11:54 Post subject:

瞬间恍惚的光线前世性巨大的温暖柔软谎言纤细的握紧时间不能斩断欲念也忽然不可阻拦生命正在此时展开 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

海阔舟不系
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Posted: 2007-03-26 08:41:53 Post subject:

春天宁肯死去不等我喜欢这样的句子将深沉不露声色 _________________ 天海阔舟不系与我心共风飞不系的茅屋：http://djy-901844.blog.163.com/edit/

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Posted: 2007-03-26 12:00:05 Post subject:

“春歸何處。寂寞無行路。若有人知春去處。喚取歸來同住。” 那是古人；如此写春，确有新意。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-03-26 23:12:29 Post subject:

春天是灿烂的烟花！！好诗，好角度，有新意，欣赏了！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-03-26 23:19:08 Post subject:

我都成Fans了 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-03-27 11:02:53 Post subject:

哈. 问hepingdao，白水，海阔，博弈，杨海军，nobody好。爱诗的人，心灵相通：） _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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