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七绝.咏荷（荷花节的系列诗歌）

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Posted: 2010-07-27 04:59:45 Post subject: 七绝.咏荷（荷花节的系列诗歌）

谁裁绿叶做裙装？出水芙蓉淡淡香。无语回眸何日见？纯情似玉自芬芳。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-27 05:38:04 Post subject:

意境好配图美。但写荷花用出水芙蓉作类比可再推敲。供参考。

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Posted: 2010-07-27 05:52:31 Post subject:

谢谢朋友建议，我再斟酌。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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