影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-25 02:32:12 Post subject: 七律•嫩江行 |
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七律•嫩江行
轻风放眼莽林边,有水迂回蔚日前。
源起兴安拴九岭,乳滋松嫩汇三川。
沧桑波衍情洋溢,灵动声兼韵转旋。
不问蒹葭归觅处,烟霞灌顶入诗联。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-25 03:43:21 Post subject: |
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[quote="影沉寒水"]七律•嫩江行
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欣赏好律!
寒水兄,望兄加入唱和。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-07-25 05:20:17 Post subject: |
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寒水兄好诗。 |
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王国栋 秀才

Joined: 09 Jul 2010 Posts: 295 Location: 陕西西安 王国栋Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-25 05:26:46 Post subject: |
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琅琅上口! _________________ 文学是一棵树,我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-25 06:16:53 Post subject: |
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全诗皆好,尾联尤为提神. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-26 02:31:31 Post subject: |
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问好师友们 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-26 02:31:57 Post subject: |
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问好师友们 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-26 02:33:35 Post subject: |
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不知题目? _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-26 05:06:46 Post subject: |
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山城子《与白水唱和北美枫》 |
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