笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 04:20:43 Post subject: 七律-读诗有感 |
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平生最喜赋中幽,雅趣风情自可求。
韵调悠悠凭史册,华文句句暖心头。
苍松不老青常在,太岳依然貌尽收。
学子勤勤时劝勉,何枝歇息会停留? |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 17:51:42 Post subject: |
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励志诗篇,与兄共勉. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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王国栋 秀才

Joined: 09 Jul 2010 Posts: 295 Location: 陕西西安 王国栋Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 17:59:25 Post subject: |
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平生最喜赋中幽,雅趣风情自可求。
心声! _________________ 文学是一棵树,我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 18:41:29 Post subject: |
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颇有感悟。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 19:24:19 Post subject: |
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[quote="黄洋界"]励志诗篇,与兄共勉.[/quote]
谢黄老师雅评鼓励!问夏安! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 19:42:32 Post subject: |
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[quote="王国栋"]平生最喜赋中幽,雅趣风情自可求。
心声![/quote]
谢 提读点评! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-18 19:43:54 Post subject: |
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[quote="qinghongh"]颇有感悟。[/quote]
谢庆宏兄雅评! |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-19 15:51:32 Post subject: |
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结句很妙! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-19 19:57:55 Post subject: |
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[quote="山城子"]结句很妙![/quote]
谢谢老师赞誉!问好! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-26 15:19:45 Post subject: |
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雅趣钱神外,书香自可留! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-27 07:07:01 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰清老师雅评!问夏安! |
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