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黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-16 06:56:18 Post subject: 对联一副

7月15日,游重庆华岩寺,赏荷题字,在旁观看的焦连运先生要求为他写几个字,他是中国独脚绣工艺品创始人.是一位残障人士,其上肢只有两条上臂,下肢只剩一条腿,我当时不计工拙,即席写了一副对联送他.以满足他的要求. 两眸观世界独脚绣乾坤 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

王国栋
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Posted: 2010-07-16 14:25:36 Post subject:

紧扣人物特征,即兴发挥得好! _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-17 06:51:28 Post subject:

谢评阅. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-07-17 11:44:42 Post subject:

自强不息，令人钦佩。

米运刚
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Posted: 2010-07-17 15:47:56 Post subject:

好联，欣赏！问候黄先生！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-17 18:13:04 Post subject:

谢庆宏,米兄评阅. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-07-17 19:18:57 Post subject:

http://www.sgwritings.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=46425&extra=page%3D1

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-07-18 03:59:21 Post subject:

两眸观世界独脚绣乾坤对仗工稳，幽默风趣却又不失贴切自然。

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-07-18 16:28:47 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

两眸观世界
独脚绣乾坤

对仗工稳，幽默风趣却又不失贴切自然。

知音难得，慧眼识珠。

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-07-18 16:49:59 Post subject:

孔乙己离婚，在酒楼上呐喊；孤独者伤逝，于端午节彷徨。戏联，供楼主一哂。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-18 17:47:32 Post subject:

谢笑聊兄雅评.谢盈枝兄将拙联收入"联海采珠". 盈枝兄将鲁迅作品非常恰切地,非常巧妙地嵌入上下联. 天衣无缝,佳妙之作! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-07-18 18:43:32 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

孔乙己离婚，在酒楼上呐喊；
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自称戏联，实为佳品。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-07-18 19:50:56 Post subject:

[quote="李盈枝"]孔乙己离婚，在酒楼上呐喊； ...[/quote] 欣赏妙联！问好！

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-07-19 00:54:17 Post subject:

【064】四言律诗•题黄洋界先生（平水韵七虞）一枚枫叶，情系陪都。游子怀玉，他乡吐珠。汉唐古韵，巴蜀今儒。率性酬唱，能无快乎！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-19 06:41:58 Post subject:

诚谢盈枝先生题诗,先生过誉,在下愧不敢当. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-07-19 06:48:06 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

诚谢盈枝先生题诗,先生过誉,在下愧不敢当.

奇怪！没觉得有过誉之处。即便有，也是为了共勉。只是有点疑问，重庆划成直辖市，是否还在巴蜀范围内？

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-19 23:17:18 Post subject:

巴蜀大地,实难生分.重庆直辖之前,国人多以"巴山蜀水" 称之,直辖之后,渝人改口"巴山渝水",鄙人觉得似无必要,重庆虽然成为直辖市,仍在四川这块盆地内,因此,也在巴蜀范围内.顺候盈枝兄暑安! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2010-07-29 12:16:26 Post subject:

老师何日归？大家想你了。听说中国很热，take care

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-29 18:10:48 Post subject:

答白水兄,重庆又临酷暑,昨天气温已高达40度, 还有攀升之势,我已"逃离'火炉到了成都. 拟在十月中旬返加,很想念朋友们! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-07-29 19:01:07 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

答白水兄,重庆又临酷暑,昨天气温已高达40度,
...

黄老师应该回多伦多避暑，多伦多这几天才25～27度。白水兄家的游泳池正等黄老师去游泳戏水谈诗论画呢。

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