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Posted: 2010-07-15 05:22:48 Post subject: 面对面

由两只黄鹂交错在危险的对面筑巢，衔枝七月，是个美丽的结尾一些放逐的思想，随波流浪某一天，陌生而又熟悉的街道呈现一个模糊的身影不经意间，做了一个镜子里的梦正如，你和我面对面 2010-7-14夜

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Posted: 2010-07-15 05:24:39 Post subject:

请读盗指点！呵呵！问好！

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Posted: 2010-07-15 07:50:07 Post subject:

梦境里的悬崖。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2010-07-15 07:58:45 Post subject: 您这风格与Kli的几首挺像，给您参考。

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=29743 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=28240 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=27826 要我把一首作品作如是解析，只有说：无能为力。您也可以读读博弈的作品，那是纯后现代，实验性很强。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2010-07-15 21:13:41 Post subject:

注册时间: 2007-05-15 帖子: 2610 来自 Location: 台湾，台北詩盜喜裸評文集发表于: 2010-07-15 07:58 发表主题: 您这风格与Kli的几首挺像，给您参考。 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=29743 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=28240 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=27826 要我把一首作品作如是解析，只有说：无能为力。您也可以读读博弈的作品，那是纯后现代，实验性很强。看了【浅析火中的脸】，分析得相当透彻，从隐喻和象征切入解析这首诗的主题相当漂亮，赞赏！隐喻是纵向的，是需要在上下文的关联里才能找出。它本身是一个不明显的意义，是需要表现于一个与它相类似的具体现实的现象中。相对于显喻来说则简单的多，它是横向的，是在同一个句子里。是情感过剩，在表达出明确的意义后，情感还得不到抑制，需要强化，所以要找一个形象，藉此在感性上得以清晰化…… 谢谢读盗让我看到了一篇好评析，真的很好！这年头除了知名作家外，很难看到一篇好文章！问好，读盗！

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Posted: 2010-07-15 22:27:49 Post subject: 依我现有的立场，代为谢谢您的夸赞。

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Kli于落尘作品不少，您得空或可一读。
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Posted: 2010-07-15 23:22:51 Post subject:

嗯，我会去看的。好作品我是一定回去欣赏+学习的！问好哦，读盗!

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Posted: 2010-07-16 00:02:41 Post subject:

不好意思啊！，把你名字弄错了，在此，深表歉意！我这人心有点粗，请原谅！诗盗！

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Posted: 2010-07-16 05:41:23 Post subject: 没关系，称号尔尔。

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不好意思啊！，把你名字弄错了，
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