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麦田的守望者

江浪
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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:31:12 Post subject: 麦田的守望者

麦田的守望者文/江浪五月，风高过一望无际的原野稻草人的梦，跌落在童年的麦田静侯一把镰刀弯下的锋芒扑哧扑哧的布谷鸟，一声令下汗水沉下肩，穿透大地柔软的心肠最终，母亲还是矮了麦子一截割开一节节痛楚，夕阳醉入她的发丝我知道麦田的向往，像风一样坚定地回眸从不曾丢失，宛如母亲一生的守侯 _________________ 欢迎各位朋友来我卧室做客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/jianglang2008

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Posted: 2010-07-11 06:15:46 Post subject:

文笔娴熟标题再新颖些会更好。问好

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Posted: 2010-07-18 05:37:40 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

文笔娴熟
标题再新颖些会更好。问好

谢谢指导！问好！
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