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五绝苏堤漫步

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Posted: 2010-06-30 19:55:38 Post subject: 五绝苏堤漫步

五绝苏堤漫步（旧作）堤柳迎春晓，寻幽访断桥。三潭游客醉，湖畔晚钟敲。

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Posted: 2010-07-01 07:39:44 Post subject:

堤柳迎春晓，寻幽访断桥。三潭游客醉，湖畔晚钟敲。欣赏精彩律绝，问候qinghongh诗友。

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Posted: 2010-07-01 12:00:49 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

堤柳迎春晓，寻幽访断桥。
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问好家珍诗友！谢谢诗友雅赏。

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Posted: 2010-07-02 02:29:16 Post subject:

纯粹写景? _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-07-02 03:22:47 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

纯粹写景?

当年写景诗。

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Posted: 2010-07-02 04:40:17 Post subject:

庆宏兄，写此诗时有无禅理隐其中？

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Posted: 2010-07-02 10:21:26 Post subject:

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庆宏兄，写此诗时有无禅理隐其中？

坦白讲，当时没有。只是陶醉于西湖美景，信笔而写，笑聊兄见笑。

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Posted: 2010-07-06 05:51:42 Post subject:

堤柳迎春晓，寻幽访断桥。三潭游客醉，湖畔晚钟敲。游客醉西湖、、、再赏好绝！

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Posted: 2010-07-06 08:41:58 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！试写了西湖四景：苏堤春晓，断桥仙踪。三潭印月，净寺晚钟。

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Posted: 2010-07-06 23:04:15 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！ ...[/quote] 还望庆宏兄拿出来共赏哦！

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Posted: 2010-07-07 13:54:24 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！
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还望庆宏兄拿出来共赏哦！

《苏堤漫步》四句写了四景，看来笑聊兄要求我扩展开。我只好草就呈上，望指正：

五绝西湖四景（四首）

其一苏堤春晓

苏堤翠柳飘，西子迎风娇。
蘸尽满湖水，难将美貌描。

其二断桥仙踪

断桥幽景忆，仙女下尘凡。
风雨同舟渡，奇缘万古传。

其三三潭印月

明月照三潭，蟾宫出水间。
碧波花影里，疑是美人还。

其四净寺晚钟

净寺晚钟音，湖滨夜幕临。
几多还愿客，怀有向佛心？

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Posted: 2010-07-10 05:06:45 Post subject:

欣赏！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-10 06:11:50 Post subject:

王国栋 wrote:

欣赏！

谢诗友雅赏。欢迎新朋友！

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Posted: 2010-07-10 17:48:02 Post subject:

意境挺不错。 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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Posted: 2010-07-10 18:29:43 Post subject:

杨光 wrote:

意境挺不错。

谢诗友雅赏。

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Posted: 2010-07-10 20:36:36 Post subject: 卜算子-西湖和庆宏兄

起舞白苏堤，饮水跑泉好。残雪仙踪显美谈，十里香荷俏。暮鼓晚霞呈，明月三潭照。常恨余生恁远离，不得天堂老。注：跑泉，虎跑泉。饮龙井茶，此水最宜。残雪，断桥残雪。为西湖景色之一。

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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:08:06 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

起舞白苏堤，饮水跑泉好。
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谢笑聊兄赐和！问好。

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