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行香子·思念
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 04:25:59    Post subject: 行香子·思念 Reply with quote

月上西楼,一叶知秋。  
许多意,曾付东流。  
人依河畔,离恨难收。  
尽思绪飞,愁一箭,风嗖嗖。
  
心筝远去,碧水悠悠。  
许多梦,一叶轻舟。  
载不动影,心事曾休?
任风儿吹,山如黛,爱幽幽。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 04:53:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

热烈欢迎王国栋朋友!!!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 05:20:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢远方的热心朋友,希望我们能成为文友,可以切磋。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 15:49:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

许多意,曾付西流。西改东如何?

问好朋友,加强交流.诗握!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 18:38:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

我仔细斟酌后,感觉可以,已经修改,多谢!
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