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五绝 西湖四景(四首)
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PostPosted: 2010-07-07 13:55:49    Post subject: 五绝 西湖四景(四首) Reply with quote

五绝 西湖四景(四首)

其一 苏堤春晓

苏堤翠柳飘,西子迎风娇。
蘸尽满湖水,难将绝色描。

其二 断桥仙踪

断桥幽景忆,仙女下尘凡。
风雨同舟渡,奇缘万古传。

其三 三潭印月

明月照三潭,蟾宫出水间。
碧波花影里,疑是美人还。

其四 净寺晚钟

净寺晚钟音,湖滨夜幕临。
几多还愿客,怀有向佛心?
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附:五绝 苏堤漫步(旧作)

堤柳迎春晓,寻幽访断桥。
三潭游客醉,湖畔晚钟敲。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 00:35:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

西湖风景美,遗憾未曾游.
喜欢第三,第四首.
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 04:48:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏好绝!谢庆宏兄拿出好绝共赏!临屏和一首助兴:

蘸尽平湖水,春秋笔法传。
小心绘西子,还恐描不全。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 08:27:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
西湖风景美,遗憾未曾游.
喜欢第三,第四首.


谢谢黄老师雅赏。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 08:29:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
欣赏好绝!谢庆宏兄拿出好绝共赏!临屏和一首助兴:
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谢笑聊兄雅赏及和诗。

新改:

其二 断桥仙踪

断桥幽景忆,仙女下尘凡。
风雨同舟渡,奇缘万古传。

原诗:

其二 断桥仙踪

断桥幽景在,苦恋动心弦。
风雨同舟渡,奇缘千古传。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 16:12:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

几多还愿客,怀有向佛心?

兄问得好!浪子曾到过四川佛教胜地峨嵋山,欲买一本佛教经典翻翻,找遍嵋山市,都没有找到,尽是做服装生意的,不过街道倒是宽宽的,行人也极是宽松。名山听佛音,已经是古的一截时空了。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 17:44:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

几多还愿客,怀有向佛心?
精彩。 深入浅出,令人拍案 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 19:35:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="金沙浪子"]几多还愿客,怀有向佛心?
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谢浪子兄雅赏!问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 19:42:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
几多还愿客,怀有向佛心?
精彩。 深入浅出,令人拍案 Very Happy


谢白水兄雅赏分享。这是在下一点感悟。
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