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【兰陵王】 琴瑟
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PostPosted: 2010-06-22 08:59:15    Post subject: 【兰陵王】 琴瑟 Reply with quote

【兰陵王】 琴瑟


远山碧,遮断风稠雨密。
回眸处,峰秀水怡,此地年年好春色。
闲云正似织。
千百,鸥飞水泽。
从头记,三十暑寒,心意难同外人述。

人间可求得?
伉儷重同心,从始如一。
丝丝相和如琴瑟。
还世事花落,雨磐风磨,青丝无悔黑变白,宁呴湿濡沫。

今昔,总相恤。
问七尺男儿,孰恨孰泣。
清泪只向君前滴。
恨日月如镝,病羸相迫。
来生应得,再聚首,共此忆。


【兰陵王】【定格】

《碧鸡漫志》卷四引《北齐史》及《隋唐嘉话》称:“齐文襄之子长恭,封兰陵王。与周师战,尝着假面对敌,击周师金墉城下,勇冠三军。武士共歌谣之,曰《兰陵王入阵曲》。今《越调· 兰陵王》,凡三段,二十四拍,或曰遗声也。此曲声犯正宫,管色用大凡字、大一字、勾字,亦名‘大犯’。”《清真集》正入“越调”。毛幵《樵隐笔录》:“绍兴初,都下盛行周清真咏柳《兰陵王慢》,西楼南瓦皆歌之,谓之《渭城三叠》。以周词凡三换头,至末段,声尤激越,惟教坊老笛师能倚之以节歌者。”此曲音节,犹可于周词反复吟咏得之。一百三十字,分三段。第一段七仄韵,第二段五仄韵,第三段六仄韵,宜用入声部韵。


【兰陵王】【定格】


仄平仄(韵),平仄平平仄仄(韵)。
平平仄,平仄仄平,仄仄平平仄平仄(韵)。
平平仄仄仄(韵)。
平仄(韵),平平仄仄(韵)。
平平仄,平仄仄平,平仄平平仄平仄(韵)。


平平仄平仄(韵)。
仄仄仄平平,平仄平仄(韵)。
平平平仄平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平仄,仄平平仄,平平平仄仄仄仄(韵),仄平仄平仄(韵)。

平仄(韵),仄平仄(韵)。
仄仄仄平平,平仄平仄(韵)。
平平仄仄平平仄(韵)。
仄仄仄平仄,仄平平仄(韵)。
平平平仄,仄仄仄,仄仄仄(韵)。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 05:28:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

字字传情,感人至深.问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 05:49:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候黄洋界君!谢垂赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 08:37:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

潇洒红尘,无悔人生。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 19:43:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

感人肺腑,盈盈情深!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-06 08:43:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
潇洒红尘,无悔人生。



青红雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-06 08:43:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
感人肺腑,盈盈情深!



笑聊君雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-08 16:23:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

今昔,总相恤。
问七尺男儿,孰恨孰泣。
清泪只向君前滴。

利落,俊朗之词句!一生,知己无他求,得一亦足。
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过尽晴川与雾海,未遭奇变是真人。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-09 05:24:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

金沙浪子 wrote:
今昔,总相恤。
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谢先生不吝美誉!
问候先生!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-11 00:22:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得很有情韵,能扣击人柔软的心扉。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-24 12:38:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

王国栋 wrote:
写得很有情韵,能扣击人柔软的心扉。



国栋君雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-26 14:58:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

琴丝悠悠,心语绵绵。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-29 07:26:18    Post subject: 问候冰清君! Reply with quote

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琴丝悠悠,心语绵绵。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-02 19:46:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

人间可求得?
伉儷重同心,从始如一。
丝丝相和如琴瑟。
还世事花落,雨磐风磨,青丝无悔黑变白,宁呴湿濡沫。


感人肺腑!
提读。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-03 07:12:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

句句情深,语语感人!
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