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PostPosted: 2010-06-15 04:23:23    Post subject: 诗 Reply with quote

1.诗

有节韵,能动情。
大众语,万里行。


2.诗歌

诗歌诗歌,大众之作。
听者理解,书者快乐。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-16 03:41:49    Post subject: 能相传 Reply with quote

3.能相传

诗诗能相传,人人能欣赏。
借鉴有价值,启迪心明亮。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 03:48:30    Post subject: 习诗 Reply with quote

4.习诗

想时多多,
句句斟酌。
发表出去,
又嫌不妥。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-18 04:23:36    Post subject: 白话诗 Reply with quote

5.白话诗

古体白话诗,承古传至今。
首首跟时代,句句贴人心。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-20 06:14:33    Post subject: 怎么想 Reply with quote

6.怎么想

心里怎么想,平仄不要管。
随心表情感,好诗频称赞。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 06:59:20    Post subject: 时代性 Reply with quote

7.时代性

烙有时代性,贴近表心灵。
与民共呼吸,首首诗歌情。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-25 04:25:16    Post subject: 诗无穷 Reply with quote

8.诗无穷

万物皆有限,一切均有边。
唯独诗无穷,想象随心间。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 12:59:27    Post subject: 格律诗 Reply with quote

9.格律诗

学好格律诗,其实并不难。
硬性平平仄,心灵被摧残。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 04:16:28    Post subject: 当诗人 Reply with quote

10.当诗人

想当诗人说心理,表白燃起共同体。
痴迷不悟自顾自,作诗万卷仅自喜。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 04:56:25    Post subject: 古装句 Reply with quote

11.古装句

今人谈吐现代话,写诗尽是古装句。
表白不能贴近心,远离时代无共语。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 04:00:01    Post subject: 打油诗 Reply with quote

12.打油诗

打油穿街进殿堂,下至百姓上帝王.
白话成诗古传今,唯此诗坛更辉煌!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-02 08:38:04    Post subject: 忆无尽 Reply with quote

13.忆无尽

诗者情思忆无尽,千丝万缕如涌泉.
喜笑言欢翻海浪,怒气长空天变颜.
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PostPosted: 2010-07-06 12:04:36    Post subject: 凑诗句 Reply with quote

14.凑诗句

东拉西扯凑诗句,胡思乱想没实际.
要想写出真好诗.别离时代离群体.
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PostPosted: 2010-07-10 04:51:02    Post subject: 不是诗 Reply with quote

15.不是诗

诗无内涵不是诗,歌无节韵不是歌.
好诗好歌能出名,还虽白话开先河.
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PostPosted: 2010-07-13 04:01:59    Post subject: 作参考 Reply with quote

16.作参考

以上简论不对谁,仅仅只是一家言.
若对请您作参考,若错向您表致歉!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-21 16:38:48    Post subject: 学好格律诗 Reply with quote

范中乂 wrote:
9.格律诗

学好格律诗, 其实并不难.
硬性平平仄...心灵被摧残.
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